Mark Dunstan (2025)
(Not a review, just some notes to help me remember the things I've read. But written this way because it's the Internet, and some people will stumble across this page.)
This book was a free Advanced Reader Copy from Library Thing.
I left the following review on the Library Thing website:
Heavily inspired by Greek mythology but set farther north, The Sorrow Road is the tale of people from different nations being kidnapped by Satyrs and Cyclopes to travel The Sorrow Road, a sort of Hunger Games, where those carted away have a chance to earn their freedom if they can make it to the end of the Road before being hunted down by hounds, bears, satyrs, and Cyclopes.
The main group that we focus on, some of whom were enemies before they were abducted, don't believe that the Cyclopes will let them live so they set off cross-country through the mountains. Apparently, this has been done many times before because the Cyclopes mention it. And others figure out the same thing because the run into many others.
The format allows for some of the original travelers to be killed off because more will be added later. Unfortunately, by the end, so many are added that you never really get to know many of the characters or even care about them. You also wonder, considering how Brontes the Cyclopes is tracking Torben and his group, believing that they are exceptional prey, you wonder how so many survived to make it to the abandoned city.
If you like fantasy novels with big climatic last stand battles with mythical creatures, where no one has any plot armor and you wonder who will live or will they all get slaughtered, then you might enjoy this book.
I, on the other hand, thought it started off a bit clunky, but it picked up steam. I was all set to give it four stars, but the final battle just went on way too long after too much prelude. Any good editor would've cut 100 pages from this book, split before and during the final battle. (A good editor would've handles some of the grammar problems, too.) Too many character stories are set up that deserve some kind of resolution, but there's only death. And, honestly, some of the death could have been avoided if the author just didn't decide to kill the character. I don't like plot armor, but I don't like going out of your way to kill people either. (Also, two characters appear to have died but it turns out by some miracle they survived! They are immediately killed again in a scene that adds nothing to the narrative. They could've just stayed dead.)
And for all that, there's barely an epilogue to cover what happens after, even though years pass, and the little we get isn't satisfying for such a long trek.
I was determined not to DNF this novel.
A few other notes that didn't need to be in the Library Thing review. Some of this stuff might contain spoilers.
Okay, it's been a couple of weeks since I wrote the above, and most of what I wanted to complain about have fallen out of my head. But I'll try...
For starters, too many of the characters had stories, and many of them are left unresolved because so many of them died before the end. We get one small epilogue for one character, and we get to find out that four of the core members not only survived the Sorrow Road but also the dangers of the five-year trek across the continent to get home. It isn't enough. It's almost as if the author was just as tired of this book as I was. And I literally pushed on to finish it.
We don't learn about other survivors, and no, I wouldn't want a sequel to let me know.
I think the satyrs bothered me if only because for all the Greek stuff (weapons, clothing, terminology) that I was expected to know in advance (I looked them up -- forget about what kind of sword the thing was -- I didn't even know it was a sword), the author went into a bit of detail about what a satyr is. In my humble opinion, if you didn't know what a satyr was, you definitely didn't know that other stuff. But on the subject of satyrs, they're supposed to be men on top and goats on the bottom. Okay, maybe with horns as well (the goat kind, or maybe the musical kind, too). As I kept reading, they started to seem more and more animalistic and they weren't very bright. They could've been orcs or kobolds, but I assume that they needed something bigger, more threatening (and more Greek?) to go alongside the Cyclopes, which are big enough that they kept getting called Giants.
And speaking of giants, they were supposed to be 11-15 feet tall or so. The cover made one look the size of a Titan just from the perspective because he was supposed to be farther away and leaning in, not just standing next to them. I would think 11 feet shouldn't be too much bigger than a centaur, with is half a human body on top of the body of a horse, particularly if a centaur reared up on its hind legs.
If more occurs to me, I'll update this, but I likely won't.
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