Omar El Akkad (2017)
(Not a review, just some notes to help me remember the things I've read. But written this way because it's the Internet, and some people will stumble across this page.)
This book was a Pandemic Book Club selection. The vote was about even for this and Model Home, so we picked Model home for July and American War for August. I finished this a while ago and just haven't gotten around to posting. The discussion was postponed (it should've been a few night ago).
I listened to the book twice and then read it. I know I miss stuff listening to books while I'm out walking, but it seemed to just end on me, so I listened again. I was a little confused about the narrator as this story is something that happened mostly before he was born. But the biggest thing I missed out on with the audio was the future map of the United States that's included in the book. The oceans have risen enough that Florida is almost completely under water, leaving basically as island or two. Note: I checked and this means that within a hundred years the sea level will rise nearly 100 feet. Furthermore, the United States seems to have disintegrated a bit territorially.
Okay, so climate disaster, let's run with that. But then there's a second Civil War with the "South" fighting the "North" (again, this is worse without a map), with the South being essentially Mississippi, Alabama, and Georgia, which doesn't seem to be much of a threat for much of a war. (Mississipi was where the president was assassinated.) Louisiana apparently isn't included in the South, and, of course, Florida doesn't exist any more. Also, South Carolina is quarantined because of a biological agent that the U.S. government released there to quell succession.
Now it starts getting needlessly complex: the reason that these three states broke away is that the United States banned gasoline. This immediately had me curious why these states had such a problem with that and why isn't Texas involved? (Again, see the map.) One explanation for the oil states not being included is because they could sell their products overseas, unless things were banned worldwide. We don't know what the rest of the planet looks like.
A final straw was when the author refered to the line separating the north and south as the MAG line (from the three states). Why not just go with MAGA line? Maybe I was reading too much into it, but later, instead of them being the Blue and the Gray, they were the Blues and the Reds.
The oil angle also falls flat in that its mentioned that refineries have shut down, but there still seems to be a lot of things available that are made with petroleum products. There are some problems with the world building, in general. As someone in the club pointed out, they have tablets but no one has phones. There appears to be at least some satellites available. Granted, we see the world through a bunch of refugees barely surviving, but if they have tablets, would it be strange for someone to have a phone? What exactly is the level of technology in this world?
Okay -- now let's put all that aside and get to the actual story which has NOTHING to do with the environment.
The story opens with the narrator (a man) living in a warm, new Alaska telling us that he was born in the generation between the war and the beginning of a pandenic that wiped out much of the United States (Covid on steroids, from the sound of it). It then flashes back to Louisiana and the time of his grandparents living in Louisiana who were afraid that the war was coming to them and wanted to move north. (I don't remember if that meant "to the north" or just farther north in the Free Southern State (MAG).)
The father is killed by a suicide bomber, and the family (mother, Simon the son, twin daughter Dana and Sarah (called Sarat because of a typo)) makes its way into Camp Patience on the Mississippi-Tennessee border. They live there for six years before a militia raid kills the mother and Dana. Simon becomes a soldier and Sarat is radicalized by agents of the Bouazizi (Bwah-zizi) Empire, comprised of North Africa and Middle East nations, that wants to keep the U.S. weak so the Empire can become strong.
Sarat becomes a capable soldier who changes the course of the war with one of her assassination. However, she is later captured and spends years in a Florida prision where she's tortured (including waterboarding) for information that she won't give up. She realizes that they don't know what she actually did while they're accusing her of other things. She also realizes that their information they have on her isn't correct. She's finally released, broken, and finds her brother, who was wounded in the head in the war and a folk hero. He's now married to the woman caring for him, and they have a son.
The war is over and there is going to be a treaty. Representatives from the South squabble over inconsequential things while ignoring major grievances. Sarat returns to fighting after taking some revenge for past wrongs. Then she goes on a suicide mission to bring down the government which will start the pandemic that we know is coming. Before this, she kidnaps her nephew and gives him to outlaws to get him to Alaska along with a package to give him we he's a man.
He reads the note on his 18th birthday that has some numbers he doesn't understand and doesn't think about it for 40 years. Then when revisiting it, he realizes that they are coordinates that bring him back to the south for Sarat's final message to him.
I don't know what to make of this book. It was a bit frustrating because some of it just didn't make much sense, but it was background for the main story so I let it slide. I kept wondering why those three states and why the rest of the country didn't roll over them. And why it was all "north" and "south" -- where's the midwest and west. (Again, the map would've helped.) Despite being so far in the future, it seemed like too much of today was being forced into the story. It's a cautionary tale, but the war itself never made much sense to me. Aside from that, the story of the radicalization of this one woman and its repurcussions weren't bad. And, let's face it, the book after "Model Home" was going to get a boost just from not being "Model Home".
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