Mount Misery (Chambers)

Mount Misery
Systema Paradoxa #28
by James Chambers (2026)

(Not a review, just some notes to help me remember the things I've read. But written this way because it's the Internet, and some people will stumble across this page.)

This book was a free Advanced Reader Copy from Library Thing. I'm encouraged (but not required) to leave reviews in exchange for the free books.

Also of note: I have been published by eSpec Books, which also published this book.

Systema Paradoxa is a series of Cryptid books, each with a new take on a different monster. I own about a half-dozen (one is a signed printed book and the rest are ebooks), and this is the first one I've read. Each book stands alone, and there's a series of writers. This book did reference previous encounters by the main characters, but the previous books, whichever ones they were, were not required reading.

I left the following review on the Library Thing website:

Anyone who has ever driven on Long Island, particularly at night, will get weird feelings that strange things are happening around them. This tale brings that to life, adding Mothman, Men in Black and a mystery needing to be unraveled.

Ben Keep and Annetta Maikels know that reality isn't what it appears to be. They investigate the paranormal and find it difficult to turn down a request for help, especially when the paranormal come asking for help in their own unusual way.

It's a fun ride, much more fund than actually driving along the Southern State or Ocean Parkway.

This book, which is part of a series of Cryptid tales, is a standalone story. Some references are made to earlier stories, but you don't need to read those first.

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More of a breakdown of the stories, which doesn't belong on Library Thing:

Actually, I don't have much to add, so I'll start with something from eSpec:

Cryptid investigators, Ben Keep and Annetta Maikels, left "normal" behind a long time ago. They've peeked behind the curtains of existence, glimpsed beneath the weft and weave of accepted reality.

Ben and Annetta investigate the paranormal, especially when they come asking for help. There are references to past cases, and I imagine that these deal with previous entries written by Chambers for this series. These didn't bother me, I took them in stride. Then there was a call from a character who'd previously disappeared. He's warning Ben about this case. I don't know who that is and I had no attachment to him even though he should've been important. He was important to Ben.

The only other thing that stood out was that large portions of the text were in transcript format, as Ben and Annetta were interviewing witnesses. Scenes like this are great for TV, but I'm less fond of them in print. It makes it feel like I'm reading a script.

I enjoyed this novella. I have more in this series to read.

Random Short Stories and Novellas (2024 - 2026)

Random Short Stories

(Not a review, just some notes to help me remember the things I've read. But written this way because it's the Internet, and some people will stumble across this page.)

• "Pleasing the Queen" by Selina Coffey, 2015. (read July 2024)
  I needed something to listen to when walking and this was only an hour long. I originally thought I'd listen to it twice because I always have trouble getting into things and because my mind wanders when I walk. Yeah. When it got to the adult content, I had second thoughts about it. Actually, the thing that really got to me was the terrible AI voice doing the reading, devoid of all emotion, including during the sex scenes. The bot also can't handle dialogue with short sentences between the two parties. It was hard (so to speak) to keep track of who was saying what. Weirdest was the end when the voice switched to make to thank the listener -- the book takes on a new perspective if a man was writing those scenes. But, no, the author is female. Anyway, I downloaded the short story (novella, actually) to read. I skipped the preview.
  It was okay. Nothing special. But reading it was better than listening to that bot. Fully the last 20% of the download was a preview of a book. The entire denouement featured a wedding following by detailed descriptions of their love making after the plot had been resolved. The plot: the new Queen arises to power when her parents are killed. Her older sister is already the wife of a Elven lord. Her councilors all agree on a single candidate for her spouse (totally political in nature as these things are), and that Lord tries to work spells on the Queen to make her desire him. She rebuffs that and does the nasty with an old friend instead who helps save the kingdom.
• "Sweet Maiden" by Ginney Patrick, 2023. (read July 2025)
  This was a booklet that I picked up at World Fantasy Con in Niagara Falls, NY, 2024. Ginny Patrick is the pen name of Virginia Smith.
  Carin MacIntyre is the daughter of the cook of Lord Rimple. On her eighth birthday, he takes a walk in the wood where a unicorn finds her. The unicorn asks her to come away with her, but she can't because it would hurt her mother. The unicorn promises to come again and take her when she's ready. Life takes twists and turns by her seventeenth birthday, when Strathofire is repulsed by how she's changed. Would this be the last time she'd ever see him?
  It was a cute story. The story was about 22 pamphlet-sized pages.
• "A Conspiracy of One" by Leonard & Ann Marie Wilson, 2020 (read July 2025)
  Dark Goddess Chronicles, 28 pages, stapled. I'll call this one a novella, not a short story.
  This was a booklet that I picked up at World Fantasy Con in Niagara Falls, NY 2024. The DGC are fairy-tale themed, inspired by them in a "ripped from the headlines" television show is inspired by real-world events.
  The conspiracy involves the assassination of the queen, which is witnessed by her body double/lookalike/decoy. She has to escape, which she does with the help of alternate personalities, who may or may not be other people (including a young girl and a panther) and who gather in a court that may or may not exist solely in her head. Jenilee escapes by pretending to be the queen, and so she ends up at a party that the queen had been invited to, only to find that everyone is shocked to see that the queen is still alive. Now, she has to escape again.

• "Mud and Brass" by Andrew Knighton, 2014 (read June 2025?, possibly sooner)
  I don't know when I read this. I'd forgotten about it until I was cleaning books I'd already read from my phone. (I leave them on my iPad, usually.) I vaguely remember downloading it. (I just checked my email and saw that it was April 2025.) I probably read it not long after that.
  Good Reads lists this as 26 pages, so I'll call it a novella.
  I honestly couldn't remember much about the story until I saw this description on Good Reads: How far would you go for love, or for justice, or for the perfect gearwheel? Thomas Niggle grew up a mudlark, hunting for scrap on the polluted banks of the River Burr. One of the countless poor living in the shadows of Mercer Shackleton’s vast factories, he has dragged himself out of poverty using his mechanical skills. An encounter with Gloria Shackleton, the Mercer’s daughter, offers Niggle the possibility of love, but it also offers something else, deep in the heart of the Mercer’s domain. What hope can the future hold for a boy raised amidst the mud and brass? A steampunk story of romance, vengeance and twisted technology.

  So, basically, a story of haves and have nots mixed with a love story and a tale of revenge, as a mud person takes on a technocrat.
  Again, I don't remember much, but I didn't hate it. I'd remember that. So it was an okay story.
  As with most steampunk, unless it's written by someone I know, it's likely I read it because I want to know how to write steampunk stories, preferrably a good one.

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• "Mud and Brass" by Andrew Knighton, 2014 (read June 2025?, possibly sooner)
  I don't know when I read this. I'd forgotten about it until I was cleaning books I'd already read from my phone. (I leave them on my iPad, usually.) I vaguely remember downloading it. (I just checked my email and saw that it was April 2025.) I probably read it not long after that.
  Good Reads lists this as 26 pages, so I'll call it a novella.
  I honestly couldn't remember much about the story until I saw this description on Good Reads: How far would you go for love, or for justice, or for the perfect gearwheel? Thomas Niggle grew up a mudlark, hunting for scrap on the polluted banks of the River Burr. One of the countless poor living in the shadows of Mercer Shackleton’s vast factories, he has dragged himself out of poverty using his mechanical skills. An encounter with Gloria Shackleton, the Mercer’s daughter, offers Niggle the possibility of love, but it also offers something else, deep in the heart of the Mercer’s domain. What hope can the future hold for a boy raised amidst the mud and brass? A steampunk story of romance, vengeance and twisted technology.

  So, basically, a story of haves and have nots mixed with a love story and a tale of revenge, as a mud person takes on a technocrat.
  Again, I don't remember much, but I didn't hate it. I'd remember that. So it was an okay story.
  As with most steampunk, unless it's written by someone I know, it's likely I read it because I want to know how to write steampunk stories, preferrably a good one.

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• "The Chief's Boss" by E. Chris Ambrose, 2019 (read February 2026)
  This was a little booklet that I picked up at a convention, probably from World Fantasy Con in 2024 or Phil Con 2024. This booklet was at school, and I think it was with a pile that had been in a locker in summer 2025, so it's probably not from Reader Con in Boston or Phil Con 2025.
  The booklet is basically a short story over 28 pages, probably around 4,000 - 5,000 words. It's billed as "A Bone Guard Adventure", not that I knew what that was. Having read it, I'd say it's likely a prequel to the three books advertised in the back (two out, one coming soon, as of 2019).
  It's a quick, little story about a rescue in Afghanistan in 2003. A female scientist has been captured by al Qaeda and the spec ops Goon Squad is going to go in to rescue her and take out everyone else. Grant Casey is the new kid on the team with a plan to ride in and see if she's still alive and if she can possibly rescue her before the rest of the team attacks.
  The Sarge, Gonsalves, calls Grant "Chief" because he's native. This confused me at first. He's not native American, he's from the area, which is why he's able to approach the al Qaeda hideout on horseback. I didn't get the connection with "Chief" if there is one.

  I'm not advertising, but since this story isn't on Good Reads, and a search for "Bone Guard" gave me wildly unconnected results, I'll list the website in case I want to check this out. (Odds are that I'll pass along the booklet in a Little Free Library.) It's BoneGuardBooks.com
  A quick check shows: there are 7 books, the website redirects to a different publisher, and the little twitter account for Ambrose doesn't exist. I honestly only went looking because I wanted to copy one of the logos or find an image of the cover of this story. I'm not scouring social media if he gave up on Twitter and his publisher couldn't bother to update.




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The Axolotl Familiar

The Axolotl Familiar
Written and illustrated by KuroKoneko Kamen
(2025)

(Not a review, just some notes to help me remember the things I've read. But written this way because it's the Internet, and some people will stumble across this page.)

I looked on Amazon for free graphic novel that I might use in my Graphic Novel class -- either to assign because they're free or to grab a screenshot or two for presentations. This book popped up. I was a little worried by the cover. Having no knowledge of this book, I didn't know if it might get explicit or exploitive. That was not an issue.

The bigger issue was that this was just bad. Sad, even, not for the story, but for the presentation.

As I posted on social media about a quarter way through the book, some days I can read stories set in undersea castles where witches mix potions and their familiars read paper books, and others when I wonder what the hell am I reading?

That's the case here. And don't let me forget the fire spells.

Some of this is addressed later on, when Axol is trying to reach the surface because he wants to see the sea of stars and the rabbit on the moon. Serina tells him that he wouldn't be able to breathe the air up there like merfolk can. He is able to breathe in school (Selina is 14) because of enchantments. Likewise, there is one class in school where there is no water and the students (merfolk) all sit on bubbles because there need to be able to take notes and the teacher needs to be able to write on the chalkboard.

So it's implied that there are no such enchantments at the castle and it's filled with sea water.

This comic is based on a novella (by the author) and is meant to be three issues long. The novella might be a better read without the visuals, which are the biggest problem.

Many pages only have one or two images on them, and it seems like every image is vying to be the cover, which isn't the way you want to illustrate a comic. The title character, Axol, appears to have a single pose with slight variations. He's always facing forward (or almost forward) looking straight ahead (or just slightly off-center) even if the character he is speaking to is next to or behind him. Many of the other characters have similar issues with their eyes and where they're facing and looking.

Axol also has a size issue, where he's small enough to fit in a bird cage with disappearing bars that sometimes appear so close together that you wonder how he squeezed his head through. And if his head can squeeze through, why can't the rest of him?

Let's just say that despite the merits of any one individual panel, the artwork was incredibly distracting and laughable.

I don't think I'll look for the second part of it.

Hollow

Hollow
Written by Shannon Watters and Branden Boyer-White,
Illustrated by Berenice Nelle (2022)

(Not a review, just some notes to help me remember the things I've read. But written this way because it's the Internet, and some people will stumble across this page.)

This past fall, I started looking for more standalone graphic novels at the library, both to read and to find examples of artwork that I could show in my Graphic Novel class. This was a hardcover that wasn't part of a series. Three teens on the cover in the dark in the woods, with the word "Hollow" as the title. I'm not sure when I notice the bright orange pumpkin or the dark figure holding it. (To be fair, the lighting in that section of the library isn't great.

Anyway, it's obviously a take on Sleepy Hollow, and from the clothes you can see that it's a modern take. Thankfully, it's not a modern retelling where the original tale never took place (but everything else in the world is the same). Aside from that ...

The story was okay, but the artwork was problematic. I spent too much time noticing it and looking at it for the wrong reasons.

This book has sat in a TBR pile for months because I hadn't gotten to read the book on top of it. (Straight on Till Morning) I read this is a day. (Free read Friday helped, as did two subway rides.) Had I not been so quick to read it, I might've taken another look at the cover, where you'll notice the central character has full lips that are a little glossy and what appears to be an earring or stud on her lobe.

This might've helped because for the first portion of the book, despite being told that Izzy Crane is Isabel Crane, she looked like a boy. No one else (character-wise) seemed to think she was a boy. The only confusion was mine. It was a good chunk of the book before her jacket became a longer coat.

Basically, it seemed to me, and I could be way off-base especially now that I know the writer also wrote Lumberjanes, but it seemed like the story was originally written for Izzy to be male, and then switched a queer romance. Aside from how she's drawn, there are other little bits that seem odd. For example, when Izzy's mother asks if Izzy has met anyone at her new school, Izzy replies that there's one good who's kind of cool.

Mom gets excited and says, "A GIRL?" and automatically assumes that there's a spark of a romance to be had. Why would mom assume that when her daughter makes friends with a girl that there might be some romantic spark going on? (I never had my mother ask "A BOY?" when I made a friend in school.) And Izzy said the girl was cool, not possibly gay, particularly since she hasn't gotten to know her yet.

Isabel's image aside (and it did change subtly throughout the book so that at times she appeared more feminine), my bigger concern was how the artwork changed styles. In one panel, we're close-up and can see the whites of their eyes and even the shapes of their eyes, and in the next, everyone has two dots for eyes and maybe a nose but not necessarily. The abrupt shift back and forth was confusing. It felt like there were two different artists at work some times. It was a major distraction.

There were times when I wasn't sure that the third character, who had to be Croc, was actually him or someone new.

The story is that Sleepy Hollow loves celebrating its legend. One person who doesn't in Vicky Van Tassel, who is a descendant of the original woman from Irving's story (which is fictional but based on real events). She hates being used because she's a Van Tassel. When Izzy first shows up, she wants nothing to do with her because her last name is Crane. Too much.

Meanwhile the horseman has been appearing again. When it chases Izzy (who doesn't believe in this nonsense until then), she learns that it's appearing to protect Vicky from all threats, and this Hallloween is a "dark Halloween" when the threat is likely to appear.

Also there's a new substitute teacher named Mr. Tenebrous, which is defined as dark, shadowy, or obscure. I mean, it's obvious he's evil but does it have to be that obvious? Well, it's a Buffy/Scooby Doo type story, so I guess it does. In any case, Tenebrous is an evil spirit who has cursed the Van Tassel family from the time of the original story.

One final quibble which they acknowledge in the story: Katrina Van Tassel married Brom Bones, aka Brom Van Brunt. So their children would've had the family name Van Brunt, unless they divorced and she had a bastard son to carry on the Van Tassel name. Of course, the Van Tassel name could've survived, but Vicky shouldn't be descended from Katrina. A quick explanation is that the family the name now for public events. As it is, the town of Sleepy Hollow is really just North Tarrytown, NY, which changed its name in 1996.

Edit: Here's an example of what I was talking about with the distracting artwork.

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Clarkesworld Magazine, Issue 208 (January 2024)

Clarkesworld Magazine, Issue 208
edited by Neil Clarke (January 2024)

(Not a review, just some notes to help me remember the things I've read. But written this way because it's the Internet, and some people will stumble across this page.)

Neil Clarke is the editor of a fabulous online science fiction magazine, Clarkesworld. (Note: I have submitted many stories to Clarkesworld. As of this writing, I have not been accepted. That doesn't mean I won't stop trying, nor does that bias this review in any way.)

If I've been informed correctly, when Neil goes to conventions, he brings along paperback copies of his magazine that didn't pass quality control. This book in particular is stamped on the inside front cover: This Is A Misprint. The cover failed quality control but the inside is fine.

This cover evokes a Christmas scene to me, mostly in the covers, but also there's a child and robot. However, a closer look would suggest it's spring because of the birds and the flowers on the bushes. What I thought at first to be lights are actually butterflies.

I must've picked this up soon after it was published because this was a magazine that I was reading in the pool in the summer of 2024! I didn't finish the book, so I brought it to school and assumed that I'd read it during lunch and then leave the book in a Little Free Library during one of my walks. But I never got around to reading that last four-page story. And then I left the book here for summer 2025!

I made a resolution to start reading some of the books that are piling up behind my desk in school as much as they are in my bedroom and basement.

I finished this, but I have to skim the front to remind myself of the other stories because it's been a while. Also, there's a nonfiction article that might be worth reading that isn't an interview.

The stories include: note, I finished this a couple weeks ago and have read other books and start a new issue

• Nothing of Value by Aimee Ogden. (I know Ogden as an editor that I've submitted to and I believe I've read her work before as well.) This story involves teleportation by "Skip" technology where one body is destroyed and another one is created. It reminded me a little of how it worked in Dark Matter, where a new body was created (except that one was temporary) and when you traveled back the new memories went with you. In this story, the heartbroken and jilted lover comes back to Earth without the new memories, so he's basically forced to repeat his trip because he doesn't know what happened, and it apparently plays out about the same every time. (The narrative bothered me a bit in the way the narrator spoke.)
• Down the Waterfall by Cécile Cristofari.
• Binomial Nomenclature and the Mother of Happiness by Alexandra Munckown the Waterfall by Cécile Cristofari
• tars Don't Dream by Chi Hui, translated by John Chu.
• Just Another Cat in a Box by E.N. Auslender.
• Rail Meat by Marie Vibbert.
• You Dream of the Hive by C. M. Fields.
• You Cannot Grow in Salted Earth by Priya Chand.

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Straight On Till Morning (Strohm / Sofi)

Straight On Till Morning: A Twisted Tale
Stephanie Kate Strohm / Noor Sofi
Adapted from the book by Stephanie Kate Strohm (2024)

(Not a review, just some notes to help me remember the things I've read. But written this way because it's the Internet, and some people will stumble across this page.)

This past fall, I started looking for more standalone graphic novels at the library, both to read and to find examples of artwork that I could show in my Graphic Novel class. This was one that caught my eye. I saw that it was a Twisted Tale (although I was sure what that meant at the time). Only recently did I notice that it was adapted from an earlier book.

It's funny that Disney now owns Marvel, and Marvel created the comic "What if...?" because this starts off like a "What if" book, but this doesn't carry that title.

A quick check on the original book shows me that Stephanie Kate Strohm is known for reimagining Disney classics, not just only books and fairy tales. The reason I was curious about this is that I wanted to know when it because a Disney product, if it had been designed that way. There are points in the story where I wonder if they were inspired by the original nvoel or by the stage show (which I may have seen once, but I'm familiar with some of the music).

In this story, Peter Pan never flew to Wendy's house to find his shadow. Wendy and the boys grew up a bit. During that time, Wendy was still telling stories about Neverland, which she's dreamed of even if she's never visited. Angry that Peter never came, Wendy makes a deal with Captain Hook -- she trades him Peter's shadow in exchange for passage. It's a trap, of course, but a friendly pirate sets her free.

Neverland isn't what she thought it was, and neither are the Lost Boys who have a Lost Girl (or Lost Person) among them.

Wendy learns that Tinkerbell kept Peter away from her because she was jealous. Tinkerbell takes a piece of Wendy's voice so that she can speak (although the other fairies don't seem to have a problem...), and the two becomes friends. They set off to find and rescue Peter, who is searching in dangerous places for his shadow. Meanwhile, Hook plans to use the shadow to destroy Neverland.

Wendy learns that her stories have the power to shape Neverland, but so do many other children who dream about it. She also learns that the best way to save Neverland is to try to reshape her own world, even if she is a woman. (In the epilogue, there's almost a nod to Mary Poppins as the narrative jumps ahead even more years so that she can be a suffrogette.

It was an enjoable book for what it is, and it was a quick read. I managed to complete it in a couple of train rides. Meanwhile, it's been sitting next to the bed for probably three or four months. It only came out a year and a half ago. There isn't much demand for it, assuming people know about it. In any case, it's back on the shelves.

I have a couple more graphic novels and manga from the library to get to and even more in my classroom.

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The Cartographers (Shepherd)

The Cartographers: A Novel
Peng Shepherd (2022)

(Not a review, just some notes to help me remember the things I've read. But written this way because it's the Internet, and some people will stumble across this page.)

This book was a Pandemic Book Club selection.

The meeting was last night, according to when this was posted, but I wrote this yesterday, so the meeting hasn't happened yet. I might include an update.

The book starts with the murder of a prestigious reseracher at the Central Branch of the New York Public Library. His estranged daughter, Nell, who used to work with him, is called to the library by the cops and her former coworker. A mystery three decades old starts to unravel at this point and it centers on a old, seemingly worthless, road map that Nell found in what is referred to as "the Junk Box incident."

She was fired for arguing with her father when he was in fact her boss. He coworker Felix, a fellow intern, was fired at the same time. Swann, a kindly uncle-type figure, had always looked out for her and had hoped that she'd be able to come back.

Nell and Felix are both cartographers. Felix ends up working with maps for a big company, while Nell winds up creating fake relicas of old maps (with dragons and sea sprites added) in a cramped office in Crown Heights, Brooklyn.

Nell follows what clues (and what maps) she has to figure out this mystery, and as she does, she learns about this mysterious group, the Cartographers, that's something of a legend in map-collecting circles. Mild spoiler: they were her parents and five friends from school. They were all together on the day her mother died and Nell suffered burns in a fire in a cabin in upstate New York when Nell was three years old.

Each time she meets one of them, we get a little more of the background of what happened back in those days related to her. And every time, when learn that there were more secrets among the group other than the biggest secret: Agloe, a phantom settlement that only appears if you have the correct map. And it was only on one map. And every copy of that map is missing, stolen by collectors.

It turns out that someone out there would kill for that map. And then have a secret way into and out of the library and other places as well.

Edit: I'll put this here because it seems like a good place. Overall, everyone in the book club seemed to enjoy the book overall, but everyone also had a problem with the ending and with the motives of the villain -- and everyone else's, really, when you get down to it.

End of edit

I enjoyed this book, and I wasn't overly happy with the ending, but I rolled with it. Likewise, when police and murder are involved but there's a fantastical element at work, there's a bit of disbelief suspension at work.

But there was one thing that I did have to call out: for how well researched this book is -- Agloe in particular was a real place at one particular time because of a phantom settlement on a map -- there was a glaring error that someone should have caught. They flee from police and he up to the town through the Lincoln Tunnel and then spend hours on I-95.

I-95 does NOT go to upstate New York! They were on that highway for maybe 20 minutes, unless they secret went through New England.

Now, this should be a quibble. If the author had invented, say, State Road 145, I wouldn't have thought twice about it. But not only is I-95 a major thoroughfare -- BUT THIS IS A BOOK ABOUT MAPS!! How do you get something like this wrong? Especially when they're using a road map!

That aside, I enjoyed the book unfolding. I didn't think the stakes were high enough for some of the reactions the characters had or the actions that they took, but by the end, things were explained to not be as they seemed. Still that ending.

Second edit: One of the group members complained about one character morphing into a Bond villain.

I enjoyed this book, and now that the audiobook became available, I might listen to it for the next couple weeks.

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DNF: Moonbase Armstrong (Marks)

Moonbase Armstrong
edited by Robert B. Marks (2026)

(Not a review, just some notes to help me remember the things I've read. But written this way because it's the Internet, and some people will stumble across this page.)

This book was a free Advanced Reader Copy from Library Thing. I'm encouraged (but not required) to leave reviews in exchange for the free books.

I left the following review on the Library Thing website:

Moonbase Armstrong started off well enough, introducing the characters at a lunar base as a ship is landing on the Moon. The ship explodes, which sets up the rest of the book.

After that, it fell apart for me. I found it hard to believe that this was a NASA installation or that any of these people possibly worked for NASA. There was no contingency plan for a disaster. Okay, but then you think that every on the Moon and back on Earth would be working around the clock to form a plan, and then present it clearly.

The narrative wasn't going anywhere and little things were starting to bother me. I read about 25-30% of the book before giving up, which is longer than I usually stay with a book that I DNF.

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More of a breakdown of the stories, which doesn't belong on Library Thing:

Actually, there isn't much more to breakdown. It wasn't good. It didn't hold my interest. And the recovery plan took forever to formulate and at 30% of the way through the book, they haven't set out yet, despite the ship blowing up in the initial pages.

I mention the words "around the clock", and I chose those carefully, instead of Day and Night. Why? Because day and night each last about two weeks each on the Moon. This is, of course, acknowledge. The author isn't a moron. But the characters do keep saying this like "tonight" and "first thing in the morning", which don't make sense, particularly in a NASA setting.

Also, an important mission wouldn't happen "first thing in the morning". It would happen at, say, 0600 hours. This is another thing -- there is no reference (so far as I got) to military time despite it being a government orgazination site. It's little things like this I notice, particularly when the author goes out of the way to mention other little things to let us know that he knows them (and you wonder if the characters did when they get informed, because they should.)

One thing that bothered me was the overuse of the words "Three seconds passed" during every exchange with video calls from the Moon to Earth. Every. Time. And yet --

The head of the moonbase, whose wife just died back on Earth, decides to stay on until the investigation is over. He says, "Just take 'yes' for an answer."

"Three seconds passed. Jim said nothing."

Seriously? Here was a great writing opportunity -- He could've written. "Three seconds passed. Four. Five. Six... Ten. Jim said nothing."

At least then, all the repetition would've had a payoff.

The only other note I'll make (because I stopped soon after this) was there was a very odd medical checkup for two people who are being sent to the Moon. One of them (the non-POV character) is named Ike. I think Ike is male since Ike wasn't asked about pregnancy. Then, the very next section has a POV character named AIKO, who I initially assumed was the same Ike, except this Aiko was definitely female, and was already on the Moon. Not the same character, check.

Also Aiko is introduced in the middle of a ridiculous, almost embarrassly so, sex scene that served no purpose and was a differnt tone from the rent of the book, so far. Not how you want to introduce this character. Also, if you can't write these scenes, DON'T TRY. Gloss over it the way you gloss over so many other things.

I'll have to make a note not to request any more of Robert Marks in the same way that I don't request any more bigfoot. They might think I have a problem with them with poor reviews. Marks also wrote The Fairy Godmother's Tale, which I'd forgotten about when I requested this one. I asked for this one simple for the lunar base story, not that I saw much of the base.

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Audio: Miss Peregrine's Home for Peculiar Children (Riggs)

Miss Peregrine's Home for Peculiar Children
Ransom Riggs (2011)

[Audiobook]

(Not a review, just some notes to help me remember the things I've read. But written this way because it's the Internet, and some people will stumble across this page.)

I enjoyed this book, but I probably would've liked it had I listened to it in longer, uninterrupted sessions. I started listening as I walked to the train in the mornings and when I run errands, and that interrupted the flow a bit.

The children in Miss Peregrine's home are peculiar in the way that the children in Prof Xavier's home are peculiar. They all have some kind of mutant ability. Miss Peregrine herself is peculiar as she can turn into a bird, a peregrine, naturally, which is helpful because birds are time travelers.

The protagonist is Jacob Magellan Portman, whose late grandfather Abraham used to tell him fantastic stories running from man-eating monsters, and living with peculiar children in a secret home guarded by "a wise old bird." Jacob has nightmares about fantastic creatures and sees a psychiatrist who eventually convinces the father to take Jacob to the Welsh island of Cairnholm, so he can explore the orphanage and maybe get some answers about some letters his grandfather left.

Unfortunately, the orphanage didn't survive the war and everyone is long gone.

But, really, it isn't. The orphanage is in a loop maintained by Miss Peregrine that repeats the same 24-hour period. If you go into town from the orphanage, you'll always experience the same day (and no one there will remember the events from the previous iteration). However, if you exit by the path that Jacob entered, you will appear modern day. And of the children who leave will sooner or later revert to their actual age, which would be in their 70s.

There are dangers in the past as well as in the present, and Jacob's father doesn't believe any of it ... at first.

This was an enjoyable book to listen to. It's listed as a young adult fantasy, while the movie is listed as a dark fantasy. I guess that Tim Burton heavily accented the dangers of the villains in the story.

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Audio: Heir to the Empire (Zahn)

Heir to the Empire
Timothy Zahn (1991)

[Audiobook]

(Not a review, just some notes to help me remember the things I've read. But written this way because it's the Internet, and some people will stumble across this page.)

I looked for a science fiction book to listen to and the Libby app suggested Heir to the Empire. Oddly enough, for all the Star Trek books that I've read, I've not read any Star Wars books, not even Splinter of the Mind's Eye, which I had a copy of way back when. (I read a couple of juveniles that I found at a school I subbed at, but that's not really the same thing.)

And then I had to listen to it in installments because after all this time Heir to the Empire is still in demand. It introduced characters, such as Thrawn, which were picked up by the Disney franchise, even if so much else of the Expanded Universe was tossed out. This stuff existed for so many years. Had Lucas down the movies, he might've adapted it, but Disney was in charge and I guess they didn't want to credit Zahn for anything. The idea that Leia was learning to use the Force back then and that she was having twins would've made for great movies.

It was an interesting plot, and the beginning of a trilogy. There's a character that isn't used as much as he should have, so I assumed he'll be in the next book, which I might listen to.

I had to get used to hearing the voice of Han Solo speaking, but that didn't take too long. What was a problem was the Wookiee named Ralrra who had a speech impediment that allowed him to speak English (or rather, Galactic standard). His voice, with the growls, was like nails on a chalkboard. It wouldn't have been a problem reading it -- but it might be for now because it'll spur the memories.

Anyway, this was fun to listen to, and I'm glad that I did.

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Crazy Food Truck #1 (Ogaki)

Crazy Food Truck #1
Rokurou Ogaki (2024)

(Not a review, just some notes to help me remember the things I've read. But written this way because it's the Internet, and some people will stumble across this page.)

This was a graphic novel (manga) that I found in a Little Free Library. I'll bring it back to another one.

I look for graphic novels to bring into my classroom for my high school students to read in a Graphic Novel class (because few, if any, bring in their own). However, withing three pages, there was a naked lady (a young woman, age unknown, actually) in an open sleeping bag. Everything was obscured by fog and whatnot, but I could imagine the reaction. That, in itself, was borderline. However, within a few pages, she was buck naked and fully visible. It's not too much for my students, but it's too much for me as the adult in the room to bring it into the class.

Okay, then...

In some fanciful post-apocalyptic wasteland, Gordon runs a food truck. He sets up shop and starts cooking depsite there not being any people around. While he's driving, he sees a sleeping bag in middle of the road. He goes to yell at the owner when he discovers Arisa who is sleeping naked in the bag. When she wakes up, she eats everything in the truck with her ridiculous appetite.

We later find that the military is looking for Arisa and that she's escaped from some government institution or whatever. We also later learn that Gordon is former military who now just wants to drive his truck.

There isn't much to this. Looking online, I see that the entire run of comics was collected into three volumes, so I could read it but only if one of my libraries picks it up. It's not something I'm going to go looking for -- and definitely not something I'd pay for another volume of. But if volume 2 shows up in a LFL, I'll grab it.

This one is definitely going back somewhere. I'm not leaving it in my classroom or my basement.

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No Man's Land (McPhail)

No Man's Land
edited by Mike McPhail (2025)

(Not a review, just some notes to help me remember the things I've read. But written this way because it's the Internet, and some people will stumble across this page.)

This book was a free Advanced Reader Copy from Library Thing. I'm encouraged (but not required) to leave reviews in exchange for the free books.

Also of note: I have been published by eSpec Books, which also published this book.

If this wasn't an ARC, it might've stayed on my electronic TBR pile for a while because I haven't read a lot of military science fiction. I have read novels by certain authors, and I have read stories that appeared in anthologies where military scifi wasn't the overall theme.

This isn't my first M SF anthology, but it's the first one I finished. Not that I didn't like the previous one, but anthologies are easy to put aside when a book club book comes along.

I left the following review on the Library Thing website:

The title "No Man's Land" refers to both the military aspect of the book as well as the fact that the protagonists of all the stories are female. This is the fourth book in the Defending the Future series, but it's not a shared universe. All the stories stand alone. The stories take place in a near future with more realistic science.

There are a dozen stories in this anthology. Some of them take place on battlefields in the middle of war zones while other have dangers in more unexpected places. There are ambushes, traitors, set-ups, double-crosses, and even training exercises that get real, with the stories turning faster than the military equipment they're piloting.

If I were to pick a couple of favorites, I'd start with "Godzilla Warfare" by Maria V. Snyder where Sgt. Val Harris's mission to defuse a bomb on a colony planet that Earth is at war with becomes more than it seems. In "Live Fire" by Deborah Teramis Christian, Simikan Amisano has been cybernetically synched with her weapon and with the techs of her tactical weapons crew becomes the human interface of the ship's armament -- but danger can still come from within.

You don't need to have read the previous books to enjoy this one. However, after reading it, you might want to go back for the other volumes in the series.

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More of a breakdown of the stories, which doesn't belong on Library Thing:

I did want to get more into each individual story, but it's been a couple of weeks now since I read the book and started this post. The first story was the ambush for a goal that was deemed more important than the individual lives of the surviving soldiers, and a good place to start the anthology. Set the tone. The double-cross bomb defusing story was well done and as mentioned above, a favorite.

A couple of clunkers, for me, included the traitor on board sabotaging the ship with the POV character running down all the suspects including the robot and I knew I'd be disappointed in the ending if I'd guessed correctly, which I had. Another one had the sole male character who could best be described as ignorant and worst as misogynistic who seemed to be a living straw man argument or someone channeling a time several hundred years in the past. Except that the ladies seemed to think this was somewhat typical behavior. Anyway, for me, the story got lost in the commentary on human nature.

I may edit this as the week progresses, but I wanted to get this post up already because I have a manga and two audiobooks that need posting.

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